…has taken a lot out of me. Things were busy, work was exhausting, and, well, I ended up about as far along on You Don’t Belong Here as I got on The Never-Ending Night. But there’s plenty of time left in this workshop and plenty of room for improvement.
This coming week…
…is lots of things. Fun things, like my three year anniversary with my wife. So I have some days off. My goal is to have a complete rough draft (at least) for my third story by Sunday.
(And I still have no idea what I’m going to write for my fourth week, but I’m sure I’ll think of something.)
The idea for the third week (without the ending this time):
Some whimsical writers claim they get in this ‘writerly trance’, where they write thousands of words in one sitting because faeries are their muses, who fly around and whisper ideas in their ears.
What if a writer took it literally? And how can I tie this into the theme of death?
My idea this time is there’s this girl who wants to be a writer, like her best friend. She loves life and wants to share that love with others. But, frustrated that she can’t come up with ideas very well, and that she can’t write as well as her friend from the start, she follows instructions in a grimoire and summons a fae. At first it works wonderfully, except all her stories are turning out dark and evil, which is quite the opposite of her personality, so her friends and family start to worry.
“You can’t force them to come. You just have to keep writing. Then, one day, they gather on their own.”
What she didn’t realize was she summoned a dark fae. When she finds out, she captures it. (Or maybe the fae wants to leave but she won’t let it, then she finds out it’s a dark fae?)
Her friend warns her that the dark fae strike a bargain for being summoned; They take away what you fear most. But it will be worse threefold for imprisoning her. And she worries it will be far worse when she prolongs the imprisonment for years beyond that. What she fears the most is death, so she refuses to let it free.
“There is a difference between fae and humans, this you must understand,” said Almina. “It is something we have in common with the animals that you do not– When humans get caught in a trap, they harbor hatred and plot revenge, where animals simply chew off their legs and move on.”
So, that’s the basic setup. You’ll have to imagine what the ending is yourself (or ask me if you can read it someday!) :)





Hope this week turns out really well for your writing and that your anniversary is suitably lovely :)
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Comment by Nick Enlowe — May 27, 2010 @ 9:58 pm
When I started reading your “meet cigaro” or whatever his name is I skipped and moved to the next blog. I noticed then that everyone else did too :) I skipped for the same reason, reading a full bit of fiction requires an effort to submerge yourself in the reality of the story, but blog posts you don’t have to work so hard at.
My fave blogs you’ve done have been your description of short story concepts. I think you could successfully just blog those same sort of concepts and skip actually turning them into polished works. I was really drawn into your short descriptions without having to work at submerging myself in them.
PS: 1 or so hour train ride to and from work is a great place to get a stack of writing done. I’m finishing about 2,000 words a day just on my commute. At this rate I’ll have my 100,000 word epic fantasy first novel (that’s how I found your blog) in 2.5 months.
PPS: I haven’t actually added to my blog in nearly a year but don’t have trouble commenting on other people’s.
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