Comments on: Another Annotation and a Deleted Scene http://5-rings.com/blog/2009/08/another-annotation-and-a-deleted-scene/ A journal of the creative writing process. Wed, 08 Feb 2012 23:09:05 +0000 hourly 1 By: Nick Enlowe http://5-rings.com/blog/2009/08/another-annotation-and-a-deleted-scene/#comment-1575 Nick Enlowe Mon, 10 Aug 2009 13:59:52 +0000 http://5-rings.com/blog/?p=775#comment-1575 @Merrilee: Thanks! You may recall that Lord Shanung is the head of Tartaros' Shiira faction. Well... Lord Redmond lives in the underground city Brennan, though he is in Aydomar during this scene, and is the head of 'Caligine': Tartaros' Brennan faction. But there is much more to him than that, and there is a clue to what his true identity is, hidden within the Prologue. ;) @Latrina: *Blush* Thank you so much, both of you! *determined editor face* Now, to keep editing! @Merrilee: Thanks!
You may recall that Lord Shanung is the head of Tartaros’ Shiira faction.

Well…

Lord Redmond lives in the underground city Brennan, though he is in Aydomar during this scene, and is the head of ‘Caligine’: Tartaros’ Brennan faction. But there is much more to him than that, and there is a clue to what his true identity is, hidden within the Prologue. ;)

@Latrina: *Blush* Thank you so much, both of you!
*determined editor face* Now, to keep editing!

]]> By: Latrina http://5-rings.com/blog/2009/08/another-annotation-and-a-deleted-scene/#comment-1574 Latrina Mon, 10 Aug 2009 12:59:08 +0000 http://5-rings.com/blog/?p=775#comment-1574 First off, I must say I love your writing style and I'm still so excited to read your book some day. Secondly, awesome on the constant editing! Keep it up. :D First off, I must say I love your writing style and I’m still so excited to read your book some day.

Secondly, awesome on the constant editing! Keep it up. :D

]]> By: Merrilee Faber http://5-rings.com/blog/2009/08/another-annotation-and-a-deleted-scene/#comment-1572 Merrilee Faber Mon, 10 Aug 2009 10:37:42 +0000 http://5-rings.com/blog/?p=775#comment-1572 Makes me wonder who Redmond is :) Nice one! Makes me wonder who Redmond is :) Nice one!

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