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	<title>Comments on: Believability</title>
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		<title>By: Nick Enlowe</title>
		<link>http://5-rings.com/blog/2009/07/believability/#comment-1471</link>
		<dc:creator>Nick Enlowe</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 04 Jul 2009 13:59:47 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@Steph: hm. Well one technique you can try (I&#039;m sure you&#039;ve seen this used before) is establish smaller things in scientific fact. If the readers think your story is grounded in fact, when you mention there&#039;s a warp drive later on, you don&#039;t really have to know how it works and the readers probably won&#039;t ask, either.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><span class='eg-image' style='float:left; margin-right:35px; display:block;; width:40px' ><a rel='external nofollow' href='http://5-Rings.com/blog'><img alt='' src='http://1.gravatar.com/avatar/d2e589592560cbd43ef5cdc10e329668?s=40&amp;d=http%3A%2F%2Fuse.perl.org%2Fimages%2Fpix.gif%3Fs%3D40&amp;r=X' class='avatar avatar-40 photo' height='40' width='40' /></a></span>@Steph: hm. Well one technique you can try (I&#8217;m sure you&#8217;ve seen this used before) is establish smaller things in scientific fact. If the readers think your story is grounded in fact, when you mention there&#8217;s a warp drive later on, you don&#8217;t really have to know how it works and the readers probably won&#8217;t ask, either.</p>
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		<title>By: Nick Enlowe</title>
		<link>http://5-rings.com/blog/2009/07/believability/#comment-1470</link>
		<dc:creator>Nick Enlowe</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 04 Jul 2009 13:53:48 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;em&gt;&quot;Your world must be tough on smokers.&quot;&lt;/em&gt;

LOL! Indeed it is. Only the wealthy smoke.  

First, you&#039;d need some &#039;aki&#039;, a type of smokable leaf that is believed to have spiritual powers; not very expensive, but also somewhat difficult to find due to the rarity of smokers. So most dedicated smokers grow it themselves. 

Second, you&#039;d need an ignis twig to smolder the aki leaves---twigs that are exhorbitantly expensive because they&#039;re one of the only natural ways to apply energy directly to an object, and once you harvest a branch from an ignis tree, no matter what the size, the rest of the tree becomes useless. 

Third, you&#039;d need a special pipe with a custom rigging that can affix the twig to the aki. Hard to find because the only interested parties in them are wealthy, so price is adjusted accordingly. 

Fourth, you&#039;d need patience, because it takes a good hour of application before the aki even smolders. (hint: A good time for meditation.)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><span class='eg-image' style='float:left; margin-right:35px; display:block;; width:40px' ><a rel='external nofollow' href='http://5-Rings.com/blog'><img alt='' src='http://1.gravatar.com/avatar/d2e589592560cbd43ef5cdc10e329668?s=40&amp;d=http%3A%2F%2Fuse.perl.org%2Fimages%2Fpix.gif%3Fs%3D40&amp;r=X' class='avatar avatar-40 photo' height='40' width='40' /></a></span><em>&#8220;Your world must be tough on smokers.&#8221;</em></p>
<p>LOL! Indeed it is. Only the wealthy smoke.  </p>
<p>First, you&#8217;d need some &#8216;aki&#8217;, a type of smokable leaf that is believed to have spiritual powers; not very expensive, but also somewhat difficult to find due to the rarity of smokers. So most dedicated smokers grow it themselves. </p>
<p>Second, you&#8217;d need an ignis twig to smolder the aki leaves&#8212;twigs that are exhorbitantly expensive because they&#8217;re one of the only natural ways to apply energy directly to an object, and once you harvest a branch from an ignis tree, no matter what the size, the rest of the tree becomes useless. </p>
<p>Third, you&#8217;d need a special pipe with a custom rigging that can affix the twig to the aki. Hard to find because the only interested parties in them are wealthy, so price is adjusted accordingly. </p>
<p>Fourth, you&#8217;d need patience, because it takes a good hour of application before the aki even smolders. (hint: A good time for meditation.)</p>
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		<title>By: Merrilee Faber</title>
		<link>http://5-rings.com/blog/2009/07/believability/#comment-1469</link>
		<dc:creator>Merrilee Faber</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 04 Jul 2009 11:38:50 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&quot;First off, I believe having realistic characters immeasurably helps.&quot;

I couldn&#039;t agree more.  People will swallow a lot if the characters come across as real people.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><span class='eg-image' style='float:left; margin-right:35px; display:block;; width:40px' ><a rel='external nofollow' href='http://notenoughwords.wordpress.com'><img alt='' src='http://1.gravatar.com/avatar/5f0e50dcade3fe21c475b6ea1f759a1a?s=40&amp;d=http%3A%2F%2Fuse.perl.org%2Fimages%2Fpix.gif%3Fs%3D40&amp;r=X' class='avatar avatar-40 photo' height='40' width='40' /></a></span>&#8220;First off, I believe having realistic characters immeasurably helps.&#8221;</p>
<p>I couldn&#8217;t agree more.  People will swallow a lot if the characters come across as real people.</p>
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		<title>By: Steph</title>
		<link>http://5-rings.com/blog/2009/07/believability/#comment-1468</link>
		<dc:creator>Steph</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 04 Jul 2009 05:47:24 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>That&#039;s actually really tough.  Honestly, just about all of my attempts at hardcore fantasy end up being humorous little parodies because I just can&#039;t take myself seriously if I try to make it believable.

One of my old writing mentors once told me that when she writes something unbelievable, she writes it as matter-of-factly as she can.  The more fantastic the element, the more blunt and unadorned her prose.

Never worked for me though.  I still laugh at my attempts, which makes me change them into something that&#039;s supposed to be funny.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><span class='eg-image' style='float:left; margin-right:35px; display:block;; width:40px' ><a rel='external nofollow' href='http://kranedawg.blogspot.com'><img alt='' src='http://0.gravatar.com/avatar/e46e1d5a0243170bd1e9bd82f4d561a8?s=40&amp;d=http%3A%2F%2Fuse.perl.org%2Fimages%2Fpix.gif%3Fs%3D40&amp;r=X' class='avatar avatar-40 photo' height='40' width='40' /></a></span>That&#8217;s actually really tough.  Honestly, just about all of my attempts at hardcore fantasy end up being humorous little parodies because I just can&#8217;t take myself seriously if I try to make it believable.</p>
<p>One of my old writing mentors once told me that when she writes something unbelievable, she writes it as matter-of-factly as she can.  The more fantastic the element, the more blunt and unadorned her prose.</p>
<p>Never worked for me though.  I still laugh at my attempts, which makes me change them into something that&#8217;s supposed to be funny.</p>
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		<title>By: Iapetus999</title>
		<link>http://5-rings.com/blog/2009/07/believability/#comment-1467</link>
		<dc:creator>Iapetus999</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 04 Jul 2009 01:37:29 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Your world must be tough on smokers.</description>
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