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	<title>Comments on: The Revision Process</title>
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		<title>By: Nick Enlowe</title>
		<link>http://5-rings.com/blog/2009/06/the-revision-process/#comment-1414</link>
		<dc:creator>Nick Enlowe</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 08 Jun 2009 14:14:04 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@Darcy: I saw the ad for that, definitely considering it. Thanks for stopping by, and thanks so much for writing E-books geared to help other writers!  

@packsister: Sure, it&#039;s a short read, too. You can literally read it on a lunch break. I&#039;m thinking it&#039;s meant to be a taste of &#039;Novel Metamorphosis&#039;. 

@Merrilee: Yep, I&#039;ve also read all of Holly Lisle&#039;s E-books, everything from &#039;Mugging the Muse&#039; to the &#039;Create a Language Clinic&#039;. 
That said, I will definitely not be doing her one pass revision. 
Maybe with more books under my belt and a deadline, I&#039;d consider it, but I don&#039;t believe I&#039;ll be able to correctly do this on one pass with my experience level.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><span class='eg-image' style='float:left; margin-right:35px; display:block;; width:40px' ><a rel='external nofollow' href='http://5-Rings.com/blog'><img alt='' src='http://1.gravatar.com/avatar/d2e589592560cbd43ef5cdc10e329668?s=40&amp;d=http%3A%2F%2Fuse.perl.org%2Fimages%2Fpix.gif%3Fs%3D40&amp;r=X' class='avatar avatar-40 photo' height='40' width='40' /></a></span>@Darcy: I saw the ad for that, definitely considering it. Thanks for stopping by, and thanks so much for writing E-books geared to help other writers!  </p>
<p>@packsister: Sure, it&#8217;s a short read, too. You can literally read it on a lunch break. I&#8217;m thinking it&#8217;s meant to be a taste of &#8216;Novel Metamorphosis&#8217;. </p>
<p>@Merrilee: Yep, I&#8217;ve also read all of Holly Lisle&#8217;s E-books, everything from &#8216;Mugging the Muse&#8217; to the &#8216;Create a Language Clinic&#8217;.<br />
That said, I will definitely not be doing her one pass revision.<br />
Maybe with more books under my belt and a deadline, I&#8217;d consider it, but I don&#8217;t believe I&#8217;ll be able to correctly do this on one pass with my experience level.</p>
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		<title>By: Merrilee Faber</title>
		<link>http://5-rings.com/blog/2009/06/the-revision-process/#comment-1413</link>
		<dc:creator>Merrilee Faber</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 07 Jun 2009 23:23:42 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Have you looked at Holly Lisle&#039;s one pass revision process?  http://hollylisle.com/fm/Articles/wc2-4.html It&#039;s not my cup of tea, but lots of people swear by it.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><span class='eg-image' style='float:left; margin-right:35px; display:block;; width:40px' ><a rel='external nofollow' href='http://notenoughwords.wordpress.com'><img alt='' src='http://1.gravatar.com/avatar/5f0e50dcade3fe21c475b6ea1f759a1a?s=40&amp;d=http%3A%2F%2Fuse.perl.org%2Fimages%2Fpix.gif%3Fs%3D40&amp;r=X' class='avatar avatar-40 photo' height='40' width='40' /></a></span>Have you looked at Holly Lisle&#8217;s one pass revision process?  <a href="http://hollylisle.com/fm/Articles/wc2-4.html" rel="nofollow">http://hollylisle.com/fm/Articles/wc2-4.html</a> It&#8217;s not my cup of tea, but lots of people swear by it.</p>
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		<title>By: packsister</title>
		<link>http://5-rings.com/blog/2009/06/the-revision-process/#comment-1411</link>
		<dc:creator>packsister</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 07 Jun 2009 21:17:01 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks for that book recommendation. Highly interesting!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><span class='eg-image' style='float:left; margin-right:35px; display:block;; width:40px' ><a rel='external nofollow' href='http://packsister.wordpress.com/'><img alt='' src='http://0.gravatar.com/avatar/e623c65110d6e08155597656716b2f5d?s=40&amp;d=http%3A%2F%2Fuse.perl.org%2Fimages%2Fpix.gif%3Fs%3D40&amp;r=X' class='avatar avatar-40 photo' height='40' width='40' /></a></span>Thanks for that book recommendation. Highly interesting!</p>
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		<title>By: Darcy Pattison</title>
		<link>http://5-rings.com/blog/2009/06/the-revision-process/#comment-1410</link>
		<dc:creator>Darcy Pattison</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 07 Jun 2009 13:32:22 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hey! Glad you found my ebooks on novel revisions. You might also want to see the full book on revisions, NOVEL METAMORPHOSIS: UNCOMMON WAYS TO REVISE. You can find more info at www.novelmetamorphosis.com.

Thanks!
Darcy Pattison
www.darcypattison.com</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><span class='eg-image' style='float:left; margin-right:35px; display:block;; width:40px' ><a rel='external nofollow' href='http://www.novelmetamorphosis.com'><img alt='' src='http://0.gravatar.com/avatar/07f8cfb945503c24393ebe1d3edf643e?s=40&amp;d=http%3A%2F%2Fuse.perl.org%2Fimages%2Fpix.gif%3Fs%3D40&amp;r=X' class='avatar avatar-40 photo' height='40' width='40' /></a></span>Hey! Glad you found my ebooks on novel revisions. You might also want to see the full book on revisions, NOVEL METAMORPHOSIS: UNCOMMON WAYS TO REVISE. You can find more info at <a href="http://www.novelmetamorphosis.com" rel="nofollow">http://www.novelmetamorphosis.com</a>.</p>
<p>Thanks!<br />
Darcy Pattison<br />
<a href="http://www.darcypattison.com" rel="nofollow">http://www.darcypattison.com</a></p>
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