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Scene 51, in which Aeriallas is finally introduced. She’s fishing at a lake, and Cirellio sits down nearby, staring at the reflection of the mountains in the water, and begins to talk with her about what’s been bothering him—something he’d never do at the beginning of the book.
This is another one of those scenes that gives me the feeling many of the characters in Five Rings are growing and maturing, and at their best during simple times like this.
I’m looking forward to my characters developing, though I have them pretty wholesome now. My story definitely comes into their lives as opposed to showing the beginning.
I just need to nail down some of those ‘tell’ details; those things that only this or that characters would do.
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Comment by RG Sanders — March 17, 2009 @ 10:36 am
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Comment by packsister — March 18, 2009 @ 9:38 am
Now here it is the next day at 1:30 PM and I haven’t done anything yet. :P
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Comment by Nick Enlowe — March 18, 2009 @ 12:31 pm
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