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Developing a style – part 3

Posted: February 11th, 2009 under writing.
Tags: author, book, critique, element, novel, style, theme, write, writer, writing

Welcome to part 3!
IMO, style is a fascinating topic. As I write, share, and critique more, it’s just as neat to watch other writers’ styles develop as it is to notice the subtle changes in my own.

I’d love to share with you what writing methods I’ve found myself leaning towards over the past year:

1. I often drop the word ‘that’.

I decided that I would go.

becomes:

I decided I would go.

But not always. I try to play a mix-up game when I write—I don’t always follow a rule. For variety’s sake.

2. I play a mix-up game. :)

I try not to let any of my writing tendencies set in stone, lest I not get better at the aspects of writing I sucketh at.

3. I italicize thoughts.

One thing I love to do in my stories is italicize the thoughts of the POV character during narration:

She watched in awe as the crowd parted for the soldiers. Someday I’ll enlist, too.

Mmm… so effective. So stream-lined. The reader gets lead straight into exactly what’s going on in the character’s head in real-time. No fumbling with quotes, tags, or extra commas.

When I employ this method, tagging the POV character’s thoughts isn’t something I do very often. But I’ll sometimes throw on a tag if it flows with the narration and sounds good to my inner-voice.

She thought, Someday I’ll enlist, too.

4. I tend to use lots of contractions. Especially in dialogue.

What will -> What’ll

That is not proper. -> That’s not proper.

This tendency of mine stems from being a fan of the dialogue and narration found in Sam Keith’s The Maxx.
Mine’s a mild variant, though (“What’re ya doin’?” is a good example of what can commonly be found in The Maxx‘s dialogue).
In my stories, poorer characters tend to use more contractions in their speech patterns than the wealthy.

5. When listing items, I add a comma before the last item in the list.

I went to the grocery store, stopped by your house, and went to the post office.

Ha! That example sounds so text-booky. :)
Some people prefer to not add that last comma before the word ‘and’, arguing the word itself serves to separate the final two items anyway.

At this point I’m not sure which way is better. I was taught early on in life to add the extra comma. And I guess it stuck with me.

6. I start sentences with conjunctions.

That night, I was too far away. But I swore I’d never let it happen again.

This is another one of those situations where teachers told us never to do something that is perfectly okay. I love this technique.
Oh, and I often play a mix-up game with this one. It could just as easily be:

I was too far away, but I swore I’d never let it happen again.

7. I try to use both long and short sentences.

(Not sure if this should be considered a good writing habit or part of my style…) Sometimes, writers can get carried away, chaining lots of clauses together. Or maybe they have a penchant for using overlong, complicated sentences. I try to keep that in mind so I can force myself to add the occasional short sentence—give readers some breathing room.

8. I avoid rhyming at all costs.

After crossing Abyssmal Gorge, he finally saw it: Iron Forge.

Granted that was a cheesy example. But even when the last sentence of a previous paragraph has a rhyming word—even when the words are near-rhymes—it can be jarring to the reader.

9. I avoid parenthesis in my stories.

(Yes, I use them a lot when I blog.) I rarely see them in a serious novels. But I do see them a lot in comedic novels. Maybe it’s because parenthesis insinuate you weren’t able to fit an idea into a sentence? Or for further clarification? Or maybe the writer forgot to mention something? It’s like saying, “Oh! As a side note… Giants are allergic to juju grass”. Correct me if I’m wrong (both on the use of parenthesis and on the effects of juju grass on giants).

10. Semicolons are rare, and hyphens are rarer.

IMO, the semicolon is one of the most mighty, under-used punctuation marks in existence. But be careful; overuse of it can come off as pretentious. In my casual writing, I’m all over the place with semi-colons and hyphens. In a serious piece, I try to come up with specific rules for when I can and cannot use semi-colons and hyphens and stick to them like burrs on velcro.
An example of where I might use a semicolon in a novel:

It was never sentiment; he could do without the bittersweet memories.

I don’t usually link semicolons into words like ‘therefore’.
I’m sure you know the difference—sometimes I catch myself swapping symbols, so be sure you’re not mixing up the semicolon and the colon.

That’s all I can think of right now, but there are so many different elements in styles that it’s hard to cover them all.

You might even have certain ascetic themes and subject-matter that link together every work you’ve ever written. I subscribe to a few author newsletters. Last year, one of those authors gleefully announced she discovered a common theme that linked together all of her previous works: wishing she could fly.

« « Developing a style – part 2 | Developing a style – part 4 » »


7 Comments »

  1. Great post! It’s so silly but it fascinates me knowing all your techniques. I guess I like to get into people heads? :P

    “In my stories, poorer characters tend to use more contractions in their speech patterns than the wealthy.” I love that technique! I have seen it done in some of my favorite novels. I can’t stand when all the characters talk a like. IMO all characters needs to have their own voice and that technique lets them do that. Love it!

    Oh, and I so love semicolons & hyphens. :D I don’t normally use them right but still, I do enjoy using them.

    Italicize thoughts – another one of my favorites. Again, some of my favorite writers use that very same technique. It’s just so much easier to read. The flow is better too. Plus it looks good. :)

    Hmm, I am reading a lot lately so if I come across any techniques I like, I may just share them as well. :P

    [Reply]

    Comment by Latrina — February 11, 2009 @ 8:04 pm


  2. Like I said I find this stuff interesting, so definitely share them here if you notice any :)

    [Reply]

    Comment by Nick Enlowe — February 11, 2009 @ 9:56 pm


  3. Ahh, the mighty semicolon. I use it in quantities, I must admit.

    It’s funny, I see a lot of my own style underlined here, but I thought it funny how you change accents based on class, whereas I base it on intelligence to the most degree, or adding an accent to character-foundation.

    Recently I have found myself creating main characters that are English by accent – as I am – and placing more North American accented types around them; whether to distinguish them, the location, or the main character, I don’t know.

    Over on my side, I talked about Fantasy vs. Sci-Fi – and I think that touches on the style I tend towards, by my natural inclination.

    [Reply]

    Comment by RG Sanders — February 12, 2009 @ 10:49 am


  4. @RG – Hiya. Good point – our favorite genres have a huge impact on style. Some people focus on Sci-Fi with hints of Fantasy mixed in. Others prefer to add more Mystery to the mix than anything else. Styles are soooo alchemic.

    PS-> I see you plugged my old website ^__^;

    [Reply]

    Comment by Nick Enlowe — February 13, 2009 @ 11:15 am


  5. Your welcome ;P

    [Reply]

    Comment by RG Sanders — February 17, 2009 @ 6:34 pm


  6. Shit… you’re… YOU’RE welcome. That teaches me not to type with a baby on my arm.

    [Reply]

    Comment by RG Sanders — February 17, 2009 @ 6:35 pm


  7. oo, that should be an olympic sport.

    [Reply]

    Comment by Nick Enlowe — February 18, 2009 @ 9:43 pm



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