Scene 05

This scene continued with Cirellio reaching the city of Shiira. It allowed me to describe what he saw as he approached the east gate.

Then it cut to Lord Gazic attaching a message to his avian courier, Matar, who he instructed to fly to Shiira.

Quite a short scene! It came out to 533 words.

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I suppose I should get to updating the characters and locations pages. Oh, and it looks like ‘Nick Enlowe’ won the poll for best pen name by a landslide. There must be something special about the extra ‘e’ at the end, hm? :)

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Enlowe gives it that British mystique I think, which is why I voted for it. I’m slightly biased toward British Literature anyway :P

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Comment by christopher. — October 19, 2008 @ 8:27 pm
Hm, the extra “e” just looked cooler to me. :P

Looking forward to reading more about the characters/locations.

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Comment by Latrina — October 19, 2008 @ 8:30 pm
The “e” softens the abrupt sound in “Nick.”

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Comment by Steph — October 20, 2008 @ 7:21 am
*strokes his non-existant beard*
interesting, interesting…

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Comment by cirellio — October 21, 2008 @ 5:09 pm