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	<title>Comments on: Courtly etiquette/Three things</title>
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		<title>By: cirellio</title>
		<link>http://5-rings.com/blog/2008/08/courtly-etiquette-three-things/#comment-281</link>
		<dc:creator>cirellio</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 22 Aug 2008 11:30:03 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks! I found it was a difficult topic to competently approach.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><span class='eg-image' style='float:left; margin-right:35px; display:block;; width:40px' ><img alt='' src='http://1.gravatar.com/avatar/3b0ec3a9c1de69255fbeef7a1b5a3fad?s=40&amp;d=http%3A%2F%2Fuse.perl.org%2Fimages%2Fpix.gif%3Fs%3D40&amp;r=X' class='avatar avatar-40 photo' height='40' width='40' /></span>Thanks! I found it was a difficult topic to competently approach.</p>
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		<title>By: Ken Kiser</title>
		<link>http://5-rings.com/blog/2008/08/courtly-etiquette-three-things/#comment-280</link>
		<dc:creator>Ken Kiser</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 22 Aug 2008 10:05:21 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Wow, &quot;court etiquette&quot; is something that I&#039;m working on myself for book two of my work. It was funny to see this right as I started working on it. You&#039;ve got some nice ideas.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><span class='eg-image' style='float:left; margin-right:35px; display:block;; width:40px' ><a rel='external nofollow' href='http://fifthwind.wordpress.com/'><img alt='' src='http://0.gravatar.com/avatar/4376e564c2d6d788a730b0e20312bfe9?s=40&amp;d=http%3A%2F%2Fuse.perl.org%2Fimages%2Fpix.gif%3Fs%3D40&amp;r=X' class='avatar avatar-40 photo' height='40' width='40' /></a></span>Wow, &#8220;court etiquette&#8221; is something that I&#8217;m working on myself for book two of my work. It was funny to see this right as I started working on it. You&#8217;ve got some nice ideas.</p>
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		<title>By: RG Sanders</title>
		<link>http://5-rings.com/blog/2008/08/courtly-etiquette-three-things/#comment-279</link>
		<dc:creator>RG Sanders</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 21 Aug 2008 16:24:03 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>The floating city thing? Nah. That concept is something I imagine everyone has at least once. Just interesting - and good - to know someone else is on the same page as me regards the ability to over-shoot on the detailing.

Building the framework, but letting the reader take it from there - you read my mind.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><span class='eg-image' style='float:left; margin-right:35px; display:block;; width:40px' ><a rel='external nofollow' href='http://thegentlemanhighwayman.blogspot.com'><img alt='' src='http://0.gravatar.com/avatar/ebf6a90b943d43f5db528f6cff8cfd43?s=40&amp;d=http%3A%2F%2Fuse.perl.org%2Fimages%2Fpix.gif%3Fs%3D40&amp;r=X' class='avatar avatar-40 photo' height='40' width='40' /></a></span>The floating city thing? Nah. That concept is something I imagine everyone has at least once. Just interesting &#8211; and good &#8211; to know someone else is on the same page as me regards the ability to over-shoot on the detailing.</p>
<p>Building the framework, but letting the reader take it from there &#8211; you read my mind.</p>
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		<title>By: cirellio</title>
		<link>http://5-rings.com/blog/2008/08/courtly-etiquette-three-things/#comment-278</link>
		<dc:creator>cirellio</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 21 Aug 2008 04:42:26 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@OS: Vivi says hi! *paw waves*
Tolkien, Jordan ... you know, maybe they did worldbuild a lot, maybe a little too much, but they had such great plots, it&#039;s almost like it didn&#039;t matter they&#039;d get all expositional about random things....

Maybe the secret is just to have an awesome, unforgettable plot? *shrug*</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><span class='eg-image' style='float:left; margin-right:35px; display:block;; width:40px' ><img alt='' src='http://1.gravatar.com/avatar/3b0ec3a9c1de69255fbeef7a1b5a3fad?s=40&amp;d=http%3A%2F%2Fuse.perl.org%2Fimages%2Fpix.gif%3Fs%3D40&amp;r=X' class='avatar avatar-40 photo' height='40' width='40' /></span>@OS: Vivi says hi! *paw waves*<br />
Tolkien, Jordan &#8230; you know, maybe they did worldbuild a lot, maybe a little too much, but they had such great plots, it&#8217;s almost like it didn&#8217;t matter they&#8217;d get all expositional about random things&#8230;.</p>
<p>Maybe the secret is just to have an awesome, unforgettable plot? *shrug*</p>
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		<title>By: cirellio</title>
		<link>http://5-rings.com/blog/2008/08/courtly-etiquette-three-things/#comment-277</link>
		<dc:creator>cirellio</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 21 Aug 2008 04:32:26 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@aeronwy: Definitely. Trying to include everything from our worldbuilding usually turns out bad. We&#039;ve got to remember as writers that supplying the &#039;framework&#039; is enough. We have to let the reader&#039;s imagination take over from there.
Glad you like Vivi and got the referrence ;)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><span class='eg-image' style='float:left; margin-right:35px; display:block;; width:40px' ><img alt='' src='http://1.gravatar.com/avatar/3b0ec3a9c1de69255fbeef7a1b5a3fad?s=40&amp;d=http%3A%2F%2Fuse.perl.org%2Fimages%2Fpix.gif%3Fs%3D40&amp;r=X' class='avatar avatar-40 photo' height='40' width='40' /></span>@aeronwy: Definitely. Trying to include everything from our worldbuilding usually turns out bad. We&#8217;ve got to remember as writers that supplying the &#8216;framework&#8217; is enough. We have to let the reader&#8217;s imagination take over from there.<br />
Glad you like Vivi and got the referrence ;)</p>
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