A lost friend, a look again.
How Annie always tumbled in.
Lost beyond the camelsphere.
Need to find that piece of luggage.
Deities in windows, staring.
Played the harp of stingrays.
Time stretched, we carried pills.
You, me, and Ursa Minor.
Poured my wits upon a script
Drifting through a time-split.
Demon always being still.
Harboring ten-thousand tempos.
Though I thought I was just bored
And it was just curious.
Bubbled up before it’s gone.
I’ve broken through a breakthrough.
Stumbling through blogs about writing, I come across poetry—-a lot. One that particularly inspired me was Shadows of Scribbles. I felt the poetry found there is brilliant.
So … that’s mainly why I wrote this free-form poem today. That, and it’s a way to celebrate: Finals week is all done! And I never have to code another line of C++ again (if I so choose). I can take a deep breath, stretch my legs, and get working on finishing up my timeline.
More great poetry I’ve found:
http://www.hyggedigter.blogspot.com/
Please share your favorite poetry blogs.
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Nice to see you back, with poem.
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Comment by Jennifer — May 14, 2008 @ 6:21 pm
I’m actually curious where David King ran off to, of http://thestoryboard.wordpress.com/ also seen here———————————————————————————————————————————————————>
Anybody seen him?
Not a whisper in a month. But life can be like that sometimes.
tch-tch.
But, if you’re reading this, I miss your posts! :)
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Comment by cirellio — May 14, 2008 @ 6:42 pm
I love this poem of yours – it is so fantastic in the true sense of the word. I love the introspective nature of it, but also the use of places unknown and untravelled. I particularly love “Camelsphere”. Great stuff!
I would also recommend my friend Fenny at http://fenny-sblablapoetryblog.blogspirit.com/
Poetikat
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Comment by Poetikat — May 16, 2008 @ 5:43 pm
And I’m so glad you liked my poem. That means you are officially the second person to give me a review on something i wrote! ^_^
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Comment by cirellio — May 18, 2008 @ 9:53 am
Yes. Fenny’s great, isn’t she?
I have a new poem up today – something light and just for fun. Stop by when you can.
Kat
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Comment by Poetikat — May 21, 2008 @ 6:26 pm
I loved your cute poem on dresses, ‘Disdressed’, and commented on it, too.
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Comment by cirellio — May 22, 2008 @ 10:30 pm
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Comment by drippingmind — May 23, 2008 @ 9:48 am
What on earth is the Society of Midnight Wanderers, anyway? Is it some sort of evil cult I should be aware of? *grin*
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Comment by cirellio — May 23, 2008 @ 8:57 pm